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TC 5-1: The Final Countdown by Coelasquid TC 5-1: The Final Countdown by Coelasquid
Not inking this round, so I guess I can be uploading pages as I sketch them this time around.

I really feel like I cheated everyone on the mob war front last time, so this comic should have at least 173% more Ramsey being a badass by the time I'm done.

ffff dialogue is so corny, but I rewrote it like 40 times trying to make sure it had the right implications and could still fit in the panels without the direction getting confusing. Trying to make my pages flow together more seamlessly than the last time too. when I pasted the last one all together like this, it read really choppy.

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Fossil and Louis: *kilojara16
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:icon2foxxie4u:
The black guy with the freckles and blue eyes is real cute, IMO. I hope he lived, or else I'm gonna be really sad. ;~;
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:icontenchibaka:
i dunno, i'm still shell shocked at your 'hugzz' pic to fully grasp the text here.....i may just re-read it
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:icongozer-the-destroyor:
You draw a mean-lookin' t. rex head. I like that character a lot.
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auryn Dec 23, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
l am behind in my reading of these! And even though l already know the result, l know you both will have done an amazing entry. And so. *reads*

My my, Dagget's looking awfully short these days.
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CreatureSH Oct 26, 2008  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Damn, I meant to comment on this sooner...
I really like the subtleties and characterization here. It must've been tricky to get in all the information without making it too wordy.
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:iconcoelasquid:
I think that's always the challenge with comicking...
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CreatureSH Oct 27, 2008  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Good point.
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:iconletdragon:
Dang Fossil got verb and tongue smacked! XD
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:iconultimate-super-mario:
I love the dialogue and one last thing,Tyrone got OWNED!
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LindseyWagner Oct 23, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
i am forever in love with this comic!
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